The Rickshaw-Puller
By Ankit Singh
Fresh morning dew - dripping from the leaves
Piercing the thin eyelids - dawn's focus beams
Raise the alarm to wake up for the grind
A checkup on the strength, a hunt for rust
Few pats on the cushion swept away the dust
For minutes I gazed at its rustic charm
My old eyes felt the first monsoon of a farm
Trembling, I gripped the handlebar with pride
My muscle is my money, the city is my stride
Maiden halt at the mansion that rose to the skies
Like the ones in dreams from open eyes
A little princess emerged chirping like a dove
Dangling locks harnessed with hair-band above
Little did I know of the contents of her gear
My muscle is my money, hunger my prime fear
On the jute cushion she cuddled herself up
Waved at her mother who sipped her tea cup
Fair as an angel as honest as a mirror
Gentle as a feather was her playful leer
She broke the ice to catch me unaware
My muscle is my money, I may have acted queer
Naively she remarked at my ripped pant
I could barely look at her neat scant
She gazed for long at my tattered shirt
My shirt grudged at her wrinkle-free skirt
I pedalled my envy through the morning breeze
My muscle is my money, despair needs to cease
With only pedals to her school to spare
My heart panted with passion none could dare
Eyes in the freckled face glimmered with cheer
The child-like joy in riding the load clear
A halt in the shade, to set up on another
My muscle is my money, I'm just a Rickshaw-Puller
bahot badhiya..proud of you !!
ReplyDeleteThanks!!
DeleteNicely expressed bhai..!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandy bhai!!
DeleteI bow to your writing. Speechless. What a contrast and you portrayed it with such panache that it leaves a tear in reader's eye.
ReplyDeleteGlad to read your blog.
Thanks Saru...Appreciation coming from you is really motivating for me...
DeleteTo get moved further, you may want to read the below verses as well
When I woke up one Night ... Excerpts from a King's Diary
and
Journey With 'Her'
Very impressive indeed!! Kudos.
ReplyDeletethoughtful, intense, nicely penned.
Thanks Vaibhav!
DeleteIts really nice nd heart touching. People hardly think in such a manner hats off
DeleteThis is just freakingly awesome, you have described this rickshaw puller so nicely I mean am short of words your vocabulary is superb and the rhyme you make Is extraordinary.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up Mr.J.
This is just freakingly awesome, you have described this rickshaw puller so nicely I mean am short of words your vocabulary is superb and the rhyme you make Is extraordinary.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up Mr.J.